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Who Am I?

Contributed by afraid_of_fear on Wednesday, 17th December 2003 @ 02:32:24 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide



The world’s slipping away from my eyes
I can’t reach out, touch, hold close to my heart
My death seeps from within
Enveloping me in this dark art

Who am I
What is this evil I’ve become
What have I got left
What have I done

Freeze up my emotions
So they don’t belong
I can’t bear them any longer
They’re killing me, they’re too strong

Who am I
Who do I want to be
Take my life away
Let me be free

Blackened thread, needle and thread
Can’t you sew up my heart
Stop the edges from fraying
It’s tearing me apart

Who am I
This little b**** in my head
I’ll never be free
I wish I were dead




Copyright © afraid_of_fear ... [ 2003-12-17 14:32:24]
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Re: Who Am I? (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Wednesday, 17th December 2003 @ 02:36:58 PM AEST
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wow very strong I must disagree however that yer heart is cold or dead it can't be to feel as deeply as you do. Loved it all...

Bobo (Joel)


Re: Who Am I? (User Rating: 1 )
by MissTea on Wednesday, 17th December 2003 @ 02:40:32 PM AEST
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Who am I? Am I worthy of this world? Have i a future? I do not know but I know one true thing! I AM a child of God, and with Him i Know I AM something even though to all i am nothing! God Bless you! And a very good read


Re: Who Am I? (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Wednesday, 17th December 2003 @ 03:44:04 PM AEST
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dearest charlotte, this is very moving, my heart goes out to you, big hugs n' love nessa


Re: Who Am I? (User Rating: 1 )
by maria_mendonez_ibardolas on Wednesday, 17th December 2003 @ 05:14:27 PM AEST
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I enjoyed this poem very much.hope things will get bettter for you.You are a special person in Gods kingdom and to everyone who knows you.


Re: Who Am I? (User Rating: 1 )
by MoonlitAngel on Wednesday, 17th December 2003 @ 09:42:53 PM AEST
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I love the last stanza! I feel the same way. Great write!

~ Moonlit


Re: Who Am I? (User Rating: 1 )
by Cobalt on Wednesday, 17th December 2003 @ 11:27:52 PM AEST
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I agree with Joel here. This was filled with emotion. Very powerful emotion.




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