|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
times victims
Contributed by
loopylou
on
Wednesday, 17th December 2003 @ 02:25:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
|
at diffucult times it was your friendship
that kept me going
your advice that always managed to see me through
i was blessed to have a friend like you
but at some point even gold rusts
if enought water can be applied
and are friendship just went through to many spells that wernt dry
so now your knocking on my door
and i still luv you so
i dont want to look at you
in case i cry
because i cant face what ive lost
you hand me your christmas present to me
ive kept all your gifts
that constantly remind me of your laught
the laught that brings back so many memories
i hand you my present to you
i pray you feel the same to
overpowing akwardness that i cant avoid
along with fake hopes
its not your fault
and its not mine
are friendship just wasnt strong enought to survive time
Copyright ©
loopylou
... [
2003-12-17 14:25:38]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: times victims
(User Rating: 1 )
by sicknivesevered on
Wednesday, 17th December 2003 @ 05:13:35 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| Groovy little write. I enjoyed it. |
|
|
Re: times victims
(User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 17th December 2003 @ 08:43:20 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Lovely write, but your poem has about 5 spelling mistakes. You should consider the spell-check offer when posting.
The Spelling Bee. |
|
|
Re: times victims
(User Rating: 1 )
by MoonlitAngel on
Wednesday, 17th December 2003 @ 09:41:44 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Been there. It's never fun. Good write though, spelling mistakes aside.
~ Moonlit |
|
|
Re: times victims
(User Rating: 1 )
by Cobalt on
Wednesday, 17th December 2003 @ 11:25:26 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| We don' much care 'bout spelling here. Meh. I liked it. It was a pretty cool write. |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
