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My First Love
Contributed by
jme
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Wednesday, 17th December 2003 @ 10:00:16 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Many roads that I've traveled
Many time have I've been broken
Never getting over you
I try no to be nostalgic
and only look ahead
But sometime it's easier this way
In my thoughts you haven't changed
You're the same as you were back then
Your breath remains upon my skin
And I still remember when
I relive every moment
Never wanting to forget
I save our memories for a rainy day
Storing them within my heart
So, when my journey ends
and yesterday is all that's left
Remember you were with me all the way
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jme
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2003-12-17 10:00:16]
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Re: My First Love
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by Cobalt on
Wednesday, 17th December 2003 @ 10:33:17 AM AEST
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| Yeah, that one sorta made me nostalgic. I fully relat to this one. Loved it. |
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Re: My First Love
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by MissLee on
Wednesday, 17th December 2003 @ 10:48:00 AM AEST
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| I don't even know what nostalgic means...lol....but it was a great write and went straight to my heart...very nice.. |
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Re: My First Love
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by Kie on
Wednesday, 17th December 2003 @ 04:01:32 PM AEST
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First loves are always remembered I think. Powerful and heart breaking when they end. I loved this, thank you for sharing it.
Kie |
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