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fleecing the believers
Contributed by
merry
on
Tuesday, 16th December 2003 @ 09:22:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
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he was not there at all
never showed his face
it seemed a little odd
but not much was said
until much later we found out
he was being thrown out
his malignant personality
had cost him everything
the woman that loved him best
was tired of his games at last
it seems he was not what he seemed
not even close to it
he had us fooled
right from the start
his trips and clothes and fancy cars
all for show and nothing more
trying to impress himself
the fleecing of believers
failed to stay the course
now he's tossed out
down on his luck, some might say
but he really did it to himself
Copyright ©
merry
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2003-12-16 21:22:41]
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Re: fleecing the believers
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by jaeann on
Wednesday, 17th December 2003 @ 06:05:30 AM AEST
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| evil comes in many fancy colors......... |
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Re: fleecing the believers
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by venkat on
Wednesday, 17th December 2003 @ 06:11:19 AM AEST
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| What a wonderful write..people never like a man of truth..they easily believe liars and fall prey to their evil ways. venkat |
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Re: fleecing the believers
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by Cobalt on
Wednesday, 17th December 2003 @ 01:27:26 PM AEST
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| I liked this very much. I have to say though I think you rarely meet the person you are talking to. I think this was a very good poem indeed though. |
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Re: fleecing the believers
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by Rakerman1999 on
Wednesday, 17th December 2003 @ 10:28:15 PM AEST
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There is a great diversity in your subjects, but always the same perfect way telling your story.
You are a true talent.
Larry |
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Re: fleecing the believers
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 18th December 2003 @ 11:07:51 AM AEST
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| this is so true, then they whine about it, and yes, have brought it upon themselves, great write, hugs n' love nessa |
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