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Hanging By A Thread
Contributed by
TheOneAgain
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Tuesday, 16th December 2003 @ 08:03:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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“Nothing can help the way we are”
You said to me in the middle of our fight
Even when you’re mad, you look so beautiful
I know there’s nothing I can do
But I just can’t give up on you
Not this time, not ever…
Last shot is up and the clock has run out
Praying it falls
Armageddon of Love comes to fast
You’ve got me backed against the wall
Love is all I have for you
So I won’t give up
Even though I’m hanging by a thread
Copyright ©
TheOneAgain
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2003-12-16 20:03:09]
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Re: Hanging By A Thread
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by ShadowDaughter on
Tuesday, 16th December 2003 @ 11:18:57 PM AEST
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Artfully done; brings to mind images you don't usually think of. A fresh take on an old, much-written-of subject.
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Re: Hanging By A Thread
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by EmSal on
Wednesday, 17th December 2003 @ 04:48:15 AM AEST
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Wow you thought this after a fight, quite nice then ey. Thanks for sharing.
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