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Wishes

Contributed by Hannah_jeannie_Brazeau on Tuesday, 16th December 2003 @ 06:36:18 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

Think of a shooting star
what do you do?
Legend says you make a wish.
And late at night
up in the sky, I see
a beautiful shooting star.
What do I do?
I make a wish.
But legend says that wish
is supposed to come true.

Wishes, fishes wasted time
is all they are to me.

What I wish for most of all
was in my grasp
for only a short time,
it just slipped free again.
Your love was that wish
I wanted most, my love.
I thought, for once
that I had got
a wish within my life,
that had finally come true.
Like a winter storm, cold and harsh
you took my life away.
That wish I had was my whole life.
And the loss of that wish
was murder of my soul.
I've lost faith in wishes
I've never dreamed so much.

Wishes, fishes
are there such things.
as wishes that come true?

And are there times that wishes
come true and stay forever?
Wishes that come true,
are snuffed out candles,
they need the flames of faith,
to put light in your life.
With you by my side
and your love in my heart,
maybe there will come a day
that you make me believe in
wishes.

Copyright © Hannah_jeannie_Brazeau ... [ 2003-12-16 18:36:18]
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Re: Wishes (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Monday, 22nd December 2003 @ 11:34:58 AM AEST
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I LOVED this poem. I have read it numerous times and the more I read it the more it grows on me. The amazing aspect of wishes is if you are falling in love or in love wishes seem possible so do fairy tales and we began to dream of the future......

This is my favorite so far from what I have read of yours. Amazing job...!!

Kie

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