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I Give Into You
Contributed by
mystical_illusion
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Tuesday, 16th December 2003 @ 05:55:47 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Through our constant malice
And all the years of pain,
I still yearned for your approval
Would have given anything to have it gained.
But you still chewed my life up,
And spat it out when you were through,
Unsatisfied by my determination
You had to sabotage the future I clung to.
Lifeless upon rock bottom,
You push me further down,
I reach for life’s surface
But find my hands are bound.
Trapped within this emptiness,
Crushed by my life’s debris,
Close my eyes- escape from this pain,
-Your happiness all I can see.
Surrounded in this Black Hatred,
Insanity closes in on me.
You were right this time,
Failure is my destiny….
Nowhere left to turn,
Nothing left I can do,
Screaming bloody mercy
Forfeiting from life’s game,
I give in to you.
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Re: I Give Into You
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by EmSal on
Wednesday, 17th December 2003 @ 05:01:31 AM AEST
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Awwww saddening...although a very good write. Thanks for sharing. Take care.
Emma. |
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Re: I Give Into You
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by MissLee on
Wednesday, 17th December 2003 @ 11:42:40 AM AEST
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| wow, very touching good write. |
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