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PLEASURE SLAVE !!!
Contributed by
comod
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Tuesday, 16th December 2003 @ 02:36:56 PM in AEST
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Text removed. Not suitable for the general poetry section, please read the site rules. Mod 13.
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Re: PLEASURE SLAVE !!!
(User Rating: 1 ) by desertrose on
Tuesday, 16th December 2003 @ 02:52:15 PM AEST (User
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Well Master while your looking for a sub in your well written fantasy poem do you not think you could of been a responsible person and took the few moments it took to post this to put in the description Erotica or Adult rating. Seeing how teens post here this is not a poem I want my 13 year old to read and before you tell me educate starts at home your right but poets need to do their part to. The poem was great I'm not nocking it I'm nocking you for not being responsible and before anyone comits about my remarks that I could of sent you this privately na I rather it be viewed by all so people get a little common sense to protect what every child views.
Rose
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Re: PLEASURE SLAVE !!!
(User Rating: 1 ) by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Tuesday, 16th December 2003 @ 04:15:23 PM AEST (User
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whoa... ok... calm down the fantasy...
I'm not going to comment as if I agree with this...there are times and places for it, neither of them are here and now... but it's still good expression in it's own right.
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Re: PLEASURE SLAVE !!!
(User Rating: 1 ) by Cobalt on
Tuesday, 16th December 2003 @ 04:27:45 PM AEST (User
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It was well written but it thats what you want out of a woman then I am sorry... I prefer strong people. I also just could not grasp the comment you made...
'no offence of course but its just struck in my about 10 '
Sorry just curious as to what that meant. |
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