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One Day
Contributed by
bug
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Tuesday, 16th December 2003 @ 01:40:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Tellin' me you really love me,
and you'd never make me cry.
Sayin' you'd never break my heart,
but all that was a lie!
B-cuz my heart did break,
and yeah, my tears did fall.
And it was killin' me inside,
B-cuz I still loved you through it all.
For some strange reason,
my heart couldn't let you go.
I still had love for you,
but I could never let you know.
I couldn't stop lovin' you,
I couldn't quit over night.
I wanted us to get back together,
but all we did was fight.
But Baby, now I'm over you.....
I feel like I'm finally free.
And ONE DAY someone wil break your heart.
then you'll feel all the pain you caused me.
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bug
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2003-12-16 13:40:27]
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Re: One Day
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by aernby on
Tuesday, 16th December 2003 @ 02:42:11 PM AEST
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bug,
heartfelt, understandable emotions,
but to wish pain o another invites
bad kharma
good write
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Re: One Day
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by EmSal on
Wednesday, 17th December 2003 @ 05:37:02 AM AEST
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Yes I understand - just wait til they are on the recieving end of the pain, then they may feel what you too went through. I thought this was an excellent write, especially when I can relate to it like I have. Glad that you made it and got over them. Take care now and all the best.
Emma. |
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Re: One Day
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 17th December 2003 @ 05:57:51 PM AEST
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| cool... off the chain 4-real!! |
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