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Remember Me
Contributed by
SuicidalSon
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Tuesday, 16th December 2003 @ 09:59:13 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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The Son is back, remember me
The one off track, thats never free
Who's sight is black, for eternity
Who God smacks, for his poetry
I've done my time once again
Trapped up in the loony bin
For crimes unknown just crimes of sin
Can't hurt me now I'm dead within
I've been that way since life began
Theyv'e seen me since the age of ten
But still they think I'm like you men
Self mutilated, myself I hated
Self instagated,I self degraded
I'm self created, no help sedated
YOU CAN'T HELP ME
WHY CAN'T YOU LET ME GO
NO ONE CAN HELP ME
I WANT TO LET YOU KNOW
I wish that I could
I know that I should
I wish that you could
I wish that you would
DIE RIGHT NOW
Copyright ©
SuicidalSon
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2003-12-16 09:59:13]
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Re: Remember Me
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by jme on
Tuesday, 16th December 2003 @ 10:59:15 AM AEST
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| Very creative. Dark, but talented. |
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Re: Remember Me
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by Lessa on
Tuesday, 16th December 2003 @ 12:33:48 PM AEST
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| I remember that feeling, it wasnt that long ago i felt much the same, it gets better, and keep writing, its a beutiful to see this kind of talent |
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Re: Remember Me
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by saddarkgirlreingsthenight on
Tuesday, 16th December 2003 @ 03:12:44 PM AEST
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i really like this poem. i am getting over my suicidal thoughts. i hope u don't commit suicide but that is your choice. i won't tell u whether u should or not. i hated it when people did that to me. you have a choice and u can even ignor this. and i know why, it the question that goes through your mind.
"They're just a stranger, they don't know what my life has been like. and your right i don't know what has happened in ur life. but i been through hell and i think that if u just find one person that cares and keep that person really close then u can get through this tough time. i have found that one person, and i hope u can too. |
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Re: Remember Me
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by EmSal on
Wednesday, 17th December 2003 @ 05:43:40 AM AEST
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"Can't hurt me now I'm dead within" - whoah I grasp this line like you're talking about me. All your words mean something to me. I hope that this will pass and I hope that you will let it pass. This was an awesome write. Take care.
Emma.
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