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Contributed by
olive
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Tuesday, 16th December 2003 @ 01:51:49 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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You've haunted me lately,
mostly in my dreams.
Crafty you--
getting at me when I'm most vulnerable.
Your face looks...
different than it used to though,
which leads me to believe that
you've...
changed.
I'm not afraid of the nightly visits
But I'm quite afraid of the sneaking feeling
that what's true about you has left me
and my dreams hold a false image
that might tempt me away from
the real you.
Because you never smiled like that.
And I never had to chase you down,
you slipping away, transparent,
just beyond my feeble reach.
Copyright ©
olive
... [
2003-12-16 01:51:49]
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Re: Dot
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by maryetta on
Tuesday, 16th December 2003 @ 03:05:49 AM AEST
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it was good, really good i enjoyed it very much
good write
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Re: Dot
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by EternitysLyre on
Tuesday, 6th January 2004 @ 12:34:23 PM AEST
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Mystical.Very magical. But unless you speak of your dog, your title doesn't work so well. Why'd you call it dot? And why is it in "oops no topic" ???
"Ehh??"
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