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Existence
Contributed by
Avarice_Riot
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Monday, 15th December 2003 @ 11:17:05 PM in AEST
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Lifepoems
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Floating in the nebula of a dog-plaited cosmos
I don't need to be aware of what goes on above the surface.
Like the flowers that bloom and die in the rain
I rise and fall with the birth of the tide
That is the way it should be.
Not to be questioned or beribboned
with senseless streamers of skepticism
It should be, like a book
Closed, so that the pages do not stain.
Everything is present
Everything passes in its own time
In its own place
That is the way it is.
Copyright ©
Avarice_Riot
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2003-12-15 23:17:05]
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Re: Existence
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by todayswoman on
Monday, 15th December 2003 @ 11:38:33 PM AEST
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| You have an amazing talent as a young writer .This was a powerful poem.Write on |
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Re: Existence
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by Menelaus on
Thursday, 1st January 2004 @ 09:57:27 AM AEST
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Liked these lines; "I don't need to be aware of what goes on above the surface./Like the flowers that bloom and die in the rain/I rise and fall with the birth of the tide/That is the way it should be./Not to be questioned or beribboned/with senseless streamers of skepticism..." yeah, keep things pure and simple.
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Re: Existence
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 7th January 2004 @ 07:12:54 AM AEST
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| Your talented is simply magnificiant. I am speechless.... |
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