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Behind The Eyeliner
Contributed by
Suz
on
Monday, 15th December 2003 @ 10:15:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
sarcasticpoetry
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sometimes it hurts
…not always
just
…sometimes
these bums come to me like
i am god
god for cheap
god for next to free
but for real, it doesn’t matter
it always hurts inside
behind my black eyeliner
and my contact lenses
i am crying
they don’t see it
…stubble hurts
it all hurts
...are you done yet, baby?
i hate it
…i hate me
but this is the only way-
to survive
when you’re out of a job
there is always the black raincoat
and the fishnet tights waiting in the corner
and in some dark alley or on a curb
…at night
…in the rain
there will be someone
who is looking for you
…for me
it should feel good to know i’m wanted
...that's what my mother said
hahahaha... hahaha.... ha...
what mother
what mother?
what mother just dies and leaves you all alone when you're twelve to sell yourself for you life?
so lost...
so cold...
a white car is stopping
just go away, helpless bum
.
..
...
'hey baby, what'll ya do for $100?'
Copyright ©
Suz
... [
2003-12-15 22:15:25]
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Re: Behind The Eyeliner
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by SkYYBLu on
Monday, 15th December 2003 @ 10:21:34 PM AEST
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| You remind me so much of my friend Amanda. She wears a ton of black eyeliner and is obsessed with fishnets... ...well... I too am obsessed with fishnets 'CUASE THEY'RE THE COOLEST THINGS IN THE WORLD! ...erm...anyway, her father died when she was twelve... and she doesn't want to get over it so she exposes her gothy self to the world, but hey! It's better than hiding it, right? I would rather be morbid than be a hypocrite 'cause that would suck. |
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Re: Behind The Eyeliner
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by Redlantern2051 on
Tuesday, 16th December 2003 @ 07:46:49 AM AEST
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| Great poem, I really dug this one+++++ |
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Re: Behind The Eyeliner
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by whisper-of-night on
Sunday, 18th January 2004 @ 08:02:09 PM AEST
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| awwww........ What can I say........ the poem deliever such a sad, painful yet powerful msg, all these things should never happen at the first place...... we should know better....... |
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Re: Behind The Eyeliner
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by StarBeneathTheStairs on
Thursday, 22nd January 2004 @ 10:38:52 PM AEST
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Love it...
Great poem....very sad but cool...
ps...yeah arent fishnets the greatest? |
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Re: Behind The Eyeliner
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by youlied on
Wednesday, 28th January 2004 @ 06:54:29 PM AEST
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| Great poem, very unique... |
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