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VANTAGE POINT'S VIEW
Contributed by
jaeann
on
Monday, 15th December 2003 @ 05:55:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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nauseating pulse
of time
flicker of salt splash
of lime
harbor's row beauty such
a crime
cobblestone penny for
the mime
make the call or save
a dime
ferris wheel rider has run out
of rhyme
sandy beach sunset beneath the cliff
of grime
an angel won her wings didn't you hear
the chime................
Copyright ©
jaeann
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2003-12-15 17:55:12]
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Re: VANTAGE POINT'S VIEW
(User Rating: 1 )
by norm on
Monday, 15th December 2003 @ 06:45:16 PM AEST
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Bittersweet life is what you note,
All are in the very same boat,
half is good and half is bad,
If t'weren't mixed..it would be sad... |
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Re: VANTAGE POINT'S VIEW
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by full_blur on
Monday, 15th December 2003 @ 06:54:47 PM AEST
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| you have a taciturn, beautiful way of describing details, so we can just about taste them! Great Poem! |
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Re: VANTAGE POINT'S VIEW
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by todayswoman on
Monday, 15th December 2003 @ 08:23:15 PM AEST
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Another wonderful write my friend
Rose
http://www.todays-woman.net
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Re: VANTAGE POINT'S VIEW
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by Ianthe on
Tuesday, 16th December 2003 @ 11:29:57 AM AEST
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a briilant staccato delivery and wonderfully concise .
great work!
ianthe |
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