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sessions from the asylum part 1
Contributed by
merry
on
Monday, 15th December 2003 @ 04:30:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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little left to fathom here
among the sharp rocks of despair
blackened burned out design
this heart once forged
with you its centerpiece
stumbled off saying
you had nothing to give
and me a beggar
my tin cup rusted out
what a handsome pair we make
tattered by ill fated attempts
to climb the highest mountain peaks
without the benefit of knowing how
we tumbled down and fell
into something close to hell
where nothing seems to satisfy
the hunger felt so deep inside
pulling feathers from our a***s
i doubt you see the humor there
as we sink in blackened pit
never to see the sun and sky
to taste the rain upon our lips
curled up in heaps of pain
we... are but a fading memory
Copyright ©
merry
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2003-12-15 16:30:54]
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Re: sessions from the asylum part 1
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by JonDgreat on
Monday, 15th December 2003 @ 04:46:25 PM AEST
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| Great write. your poem really spoke to me. i give you a 5. |
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Re: sessions from the asylum part 1
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by lovingcritters on
Monday, 15th December 2003 @ 05:08:55 PM AEST
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Dear Mer.....I hope you do make these a series, now that I know they are not about you....and yet, I've known so many people that they could be. I loved your fading memory....great write Mer, as always, and profound, as one can be found!
Loved it,
ConSue |
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Re: sessions from the asylum part 1
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by Wrybod on
Monday, 15th December 2003 @ 05:16:04 PM AEST
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Been there!......... You have got it absolutely, terribly,
well captured, Great write.
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Re: sessions from the asylum part 1
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by DreamWeaver on
Monday, 15th December 2003 @ 05:17:17 PM AEST
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| Words that speak to my soul ... great write Merry .... Jan |
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Re: sessions from the asylum part 1
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by jme on
Monday, 15th December 2003 @ 05:29:32 PM AEST
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| I'm impressed. You expressed your words well. |
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Re: sessions from the asylum part 1
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by Three_Blind_Mice on
Monday, 15th December 2003 @ 06:07:23 PM AEST
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Oh Gaille, how do you find your way into my soul with your pen.
one amazed Drunk |
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