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Today
Contributed by
broken-glass
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Monday, 15th December 2003 @ 12:40:02 PM in AEST
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They say the grass is always greener,
well I've seen the grass and it is so much cleaner,
and I slipped and fell upon my knees,
I cut my leg and cut my jeans,
the hole in the fabric is open wide,
so everyone can see the wound inside.
And yeah, okay, I had something once,
but everything Gold turns to dust within my touch,
and the Gold I held, although I loved it such,
I changed my mind and decided I didn't want it much.
I will drop a bomb upon this world,
I will shout and scream, until I'm heard.
I have been bullied, I've been the bully,
I've been utterly confused, and I've understood fully.
I've loved this life whilst standing in line,
but someone went ahead and took my place.
Life has a way of pulling you up,
then turning back around to slap you in the face.
This place you speak of, does it exist?
Would you take me along?
Would you take me along?
Could you take me along?
Please just take me with you,
because I want to see everything this place has to offer...
and I want to show this world just what I have to offer,
today.
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broken-glass
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2003-12-15 12:40:02]
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Re: Today
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by desertrose on
Monday, 15th December 2003 @ 02:23:02 PM AEST
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Those who think the grass is greener on the other side
need to quit climbing that fence
cause torn jeans is what they get
showing the world that they are an
well you know cause what happens when dandlines spoil that grass no weed killer will get read of them and you look back on your yard over the fence and you think all I needed was to give it more care but it is to late someone has moved into that house
should of stayed on your side of that fence :)
Great write thanks for inspiring me he-he
Rose
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Re: Today
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by lovingcritters on
Thursday, 18th December 2003 @ 06:12:45 PM AEST
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BRAVO!BRAVO! Wish I could be there to hear you read this one day......I'd stand and shout ENORE, ENORE
Very deep, so revealing, what you reap! Cry of your generation...ours already knew....what you see is what you get....over the fence or another view....Whereever you go...you have to take YOU.....cannot run...cannot hide...'twil always be inside....YOU!
Great write, BG...wonderful words of explanation, and great inspiration for those all around!
You write such good poems.....
Keep up the good work!
Lovingcritters
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Re: Today
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 14th February 2004 @ 08:33:25 PM AEST
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| another amazing contribution from the amazing broken-glass. love u!! e xxx |
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