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Condigned, Condemned
Contributed by
eternityslyre
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Monday, 15th December 2003 @ 06:54:36 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Drink life to the fullest and savor each second;
Make each day ebullient and pretend you're eleven
For time waits for no one and forever it flows--
Whenever you're waiting,
--You're watching things go--
A blink is sufficient to abolish your world
A moment of sealed eyes brings dark truths unfurled
Dream as you may you're eternity's here;
Eternally bound to your pain and your fear.
Relinquish your grasp on possessions most dear
And loss will prevail over faith;
Extinguish your last pure confession with tears
And forever your hopes shall be wraiths.
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eternityslyre
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2003-12-15 06:54:36]
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Re: Condigned, Condemned
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by Vitreous_Soul on
Monday, 15th December 2003 @ 07:01:38 AM AEST
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This is deep. I know you said you couldn't write, but this is quite the contrary. I enjoyed this a great deal.
Truly,
-V.S. |
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Re: Condigned, Condemned
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by a_bear on
Monday, 15th December 2003 @ 07:52:46 AM AEST
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| I don't think of this as dark at all. I see truth here. Time does pass quickly and a blink can see a death overtake us, or any other event that can shatter a life. And, if ones posessions become all-important, then one's faith goes out the window. Rather than darkness, I just see truth. |
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Re: Condigned, Condemned
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by Jacquelynne on
Wednesday, 17th December 2003 @ 09:48:38 AM AEST
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ooooh, I liked this one. It is sooo deep and beautiful, good write...
pm me
jenni |
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Re: Condigned, Condemned
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 3rd March 2004 @ 07:19:13 PM AEST
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That last stanza up there was riveting.
The rest of the poem was something else entirely . . .
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Re: Condigned, Condemned
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by BrokenHeartedLass on
Sunday, 14th March 2004 @ 03:00:23 AM AEST
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| Your so called rambles hold more truth than anything I could ever compose. A beautiful piece of work. Thank you for sharing it with the world. |
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