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how can you not care?
Contributed by
loopylou
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Monday, 15th December 2003 @ 06:17:12 AM in AEST
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how can you take such a big part of me and not even know?
i wish memories haunted you like i they do me
but you still smile
and i always here your whispers
but their never whispers of guilt
i praye you hear my cry of hurt
i cant tell anyone about this monster thats biulding inside of me
because i feel so ashamed
i feel hatred towars myself
because of your crime
so i cant recieve help i go on with everyday life
knowing that ive changed
ive lost myself
along with my innnocense
they floated away out of my mouth
along with my screams
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2003-12-15 06:17:12]
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Re: how can you not care?
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 15th December 2003 @ 04:56:27 PM AEST
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This poem need spell-checking badly.
Great write, tho. |
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Re: how can you not care?
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by rugby_player on
Monday, 7th June 2004 @ 05:10:36 PM AEST
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Grat poem. Don't worry abut the spelling errors. people that really are about poetry can tell what you mean. YOu did a very good job.. Comment on some of mine sometime
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