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My Love For You
Contributed by
Jeff_Scott_Morehead
on
Monday, 15th December 2003 @ 06:05:12 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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My Love For You
Close my eyes so I can’t see,
Take my breath, so I can’t breathe.
Shut off the sound that travels to my ears,
Dry my eyes to allow no tears.
Pull down on my chin, to erase the smile.
Clog my nose so I can’t smell.
Erase the feeling in my fingertips,
Remove the sensation of my lips.
Break my legs so I can’t walk,
Remove my tongue so I can’t talk
Do anything that you please,
But I’ll still drop to my knees.
And proclaim my love for you.
Copyright ©
Jeff_Scott_Morehead
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2003-12-15 06:05:12]
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Re: My Love For You
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by Kie on
Monday, 15th December 2003 @ 03:04:28 PM AEST
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Well that is definitely proclaiming love. Could be a tad brutal but it gets the point across. I liked it alot...
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Re: My Love For You
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Monday, 15th December 2003 @ 04:51:37 PM AEST
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Some declaration of love this is..:>)
I love it
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Re: My Love For You
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by jme on
Tuesday, 16th December 2003 @ 05:36:25 PM AEST
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| Very nice. |
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