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Death By Love
Contributed by
P0rNStAr
on
Monday, 15th December 2003 @ 04:52:35 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I take a breath I think of you
As if you consume everything that I do
Now I feel like you're water surrounding me
And every breath I breathe your drowning me
If only there was some way to get you out of my mind
Some way to erase all that past time
My memories only play back my mistakes
A vast album of my heartaches
The way I felt for you was like nothing before
And when I lost you I swear my heart tore
I know theres some way, and I will feel better
I just wish it would come alot sooner than never
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P0rNStAr
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2003-12-15 04:52:35]
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Re: Death By Love
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by loopylou on
Monday, 15th December 2003 @ 06:09:59 AM AEST
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| ive felt like this so mant times....its painfull but yet i wouldnt wish to rid myself of the experiance.....agree? |
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Re: Death By Love
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by P0rNStAr on
Monday, 15th December 2003 @ 06:25:34 AM AEST
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| Yes I do agree |
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Re: Death By Love
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by fallensilence on
Wednesday, 17th December 2003 @ 03:29:49 PM AEST
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| this is my favorite poem that you've written. the others are just as amazing but i think this one hit really close to home for me. -david |
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