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Deep confusion
Contributed by
secretwind
on
Monday, 15th December 2003 @ 03:13:42 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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WHAT CAN I DO
TO GET THROUGH TO YOU
WANNA BE FREE
BUT YOU'RE NOT LISTENING TO ME
HERE YOU COME ONCE AGAIN
PRETENDING TO BE MY FRIEND
EMOTIONALLY TORTURING
HA HA HA HA
LAUGH AS I BLEED.
ENCOUNTERS
LEAVE ME IN A DAZE
INTENSE FEELINGS REMAIN
FASCINATING ME
OH YEAH
THE CONFUSION FLOWS
DEEP.
I TREMBLE
AND
I MOAN
YOU WON'T LEAVE ME ALONE
EMOTIONALLY TORTURING
IT IS SO MADDENING
DON'T KNOW WHAT TO DO
I AM VERY CONFUSED
NOW I CAN'T STOP
LAUGHING
HA HA HA HA
OH
OH WHAT CAN THIS BE?
Copyright ©
secretwind
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2003-12-15 03:13:42]
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Re: Deep confusion
(User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on
Monday, 19th January 2004 @ 04:59:07 AM AEST
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U've captured your subject well.
Great work.
huggs, luv,
emy |
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Re: Deep confusion
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by JennyFruFru on
Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 02:28:42 AM AEST
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| I really enjoy your style of writing ... you really draw your reader in.... :) |
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