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She loves me now
Contributed by
Cobalt
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Monday, 15th December 2003 @ 01:46:59 AM in AEST
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Gone way too far this time.
Gotten so used to us
laying side by side
held together by
each others eyes we were.
But then
My inspirations turn dry
without your love and hand
here to guide and love me.
Broken heart has bled out,
my salty tears have run dry.
Now I'm walking around
and I can't feel the ground.
Bita, don't you know that day,
well I passed away.
For all that's been said,
and for all the tears shed.
Passing from this place,
always with my hands in my face.
But now.
Please let me go bita,
for she loves me now.
You can see it all
deep within her eyes.
She sings to the wind
about how she loves me.
So please let me go
for she loves me now.
She's my sun and my moon,
and she loves me now,
and I, I love her too.
The book of the faulty phoenix
Copyright ©
Cobalt
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2003-12-15 01:46:59]
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Re: She loves me now
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by venkat on
Monday, 15th December 2003 @ 02:42:14 AM AEST
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"She sings to the wind
about how she loves me.
So please let me go
for she loves me now.
She's my sun and my moon"
..pleasant lines.. venkat
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Re: She loves me now
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by Kie on
Monday, 15th December 2003 @ 08:26:14 AM AEST
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This was just from the heart, I felt. I hope you find her and time takes away all that was before.
Kie |
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Re: She loves me now
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by jme on
Monday, 15th December 2003 @ 09:49:21 AM AEST
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| You were are beautiful! |
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Re: She loves me now
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by desertrose on
Monday, 15th December 2003 @ 02:33:59 PM AEST
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| I'm sorry I"m confused. You have not found a new your hanging on to a past love yet someone new loves you ? I don't want to insult your feelings as this poem is deep and obviously close to you. Just the feelings to those reading it was unclear I'm sorry if you explain the poem I'll view it again :) |
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Re: She loves me now
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by bobotheclown on
Tuesday, 16th December 2003 @ 12:36:32 PM AEST
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I loved this, but I was confused as to who or what Bita was?
Broken heart has bled out,
my salty tears have run dry.
Loved those 2 lines of course heh.
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Re: She loves me now
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by Cobalt on
Tuesday, 16th December 2003 @ 12:40:30 PM AEST
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| Lol. I was really wondering if anyone would ask about that... Bita was a pet name. Told in German it= baby.... |
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Re: She loves me now
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Wednesday, 17th December 2003 @ 01:56:36 PM AEST
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| this is beautiful!! |
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Re: She loves me now
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by carebear on
Monday, 5th January 2004 @ 08:50:03 PM AEST
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| Wow!!!! |
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