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Friday Evening
Contributed by
doug
on
Sunday, 14th December 2003 @ 10:24:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
happypoetry
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I see your arms reaching out to hug me
in the evening on a friday night
roses sway in the breeze on the front porch
and I know everythings alright
hear the radio playing in the kitchen
dj says that the day is through
smell the supper cooking in the night air
and I know that I love you
feel you smile as our lips come together
stars twinkle in the virgin night
next door all the kids are playing
running now through the fading light
we sit out on the front porch swinging
and start to talk as we hold hands too
I feel alright on this friday evening
and I know that I love you
Copyright ©
doug
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2003-12-14 22:24:25]
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Re: Friday Evening
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Sunday, 14th December 2003 @ 10:55:33 PM AEST
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This is a very enjoyable read..thanks for sharing your Friday with us..
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Re: Friday Evening
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by todayswoman on
Sunday, 14th December 2003 @ 11:08:42 PM AEST
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Doug I read this then I went ahh how sweet this is an ahhhhhhh poem he-he ( women heart musher)
http://www.todays-woman.net
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Re: Friday Evening
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by Kie on
Monday, 15th December 2003 @ 08:36:38 AM AEST
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I am thirdly agreeing with what was said by the others. Somebody call hallmark cause women adore these poems, i'm serious!
Sweet & wonderful!
Kie |
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Re: Friday Evening
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by jme on
Monday, 15th December 2003 @ 05:47:00 PM AEST
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| Loved the simplicity. Loved the poem! I envy your Friday nights. |
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