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humidity
Contributed by
ianthe
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Sunday, 14th December 2003 @ 08:34:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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walking was almost too much effort
in the steamy jungle afternoon
the storm swept across the treetops
taking the sky with it
leaving the air heavy with rain
sweat and a lingering apathy
ianthe
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ianthe
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2003-12-14 20:34:37]
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Re: humidity
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by jaeann on
Monday, 15th December 2003 @ 07:13:39 PM AEST
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| unrelenting and thick.......i like this!!!! |
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Re: humidity
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by a_bear on
Sunday, 11th January 2004 @ 08:59:17 PM AEST
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| short and to the point. Wonderful. Reminds me of my visit to Disneyworld in Florida,LOL. oh...and my visit to Rome. The humidity there must be 100%...and not a breeze. I had friends who had made me an itenerary...so I could visit all the sights? I was so hot and weary...apathy had set in and I wanted to burn my bra, my underwear and the itenerary!!!!! Nothing like humidity to take it out of you. A+!!! |
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