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Lost In This
Contributed by
Exodus-On-Life
on
Sunday, 14th December 2003 @ 02:52:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Rain falls from your fingertips
Blood splatters on the pavement
Lost in a way so lost to ourselves
I need something else than this
The birds fly overhead
Suicidal rock stars, who prefer dead
Lost in a cycle so lost to it's own
We need something more special than this
Cry our eyes until they bleed
Kick ourselves, take what we think we need
Lost in a day so lost to tomorrow
I'll take when I figure out this
Losing all our blank stares
Grace falls as we sleep away our cares
Lost in silence so lost in a whisper
I need more than this
Rain falls from our deadened hands
Sorrow makes it's last stand
Lost in a beautiful touch so lost in you
I know we will have more than this
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Exodus-On-Life
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2003-12-14 14:52:51]
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Re: Lost In This
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by PhantomVampyress on
Sunday, 14th December 2003 @ 04:08:37 PM AEST
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this is a beautiful poem .. I really liked it.. I liked the way it flowed .. awesome write!!
peace joy and hope
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Re: Lost In This
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by MoonlitAngel on
Sunday, 14th December 2003 @ 06:52:10 PM AEST
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That's beautiful... I wish I could think of a better word for it. It's awfully sad... but beautifully written.
~ Moonlit |
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Re: Lost In This
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by Medieval_Enigma on
Tuesday, 16th December 2003 @ 10:16:37 AM AEST
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| This a very good poem, I like it ...... |
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