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Darkness
Contributed by
suzy
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Wednesday, 28th August 2002 @ 05:00:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Darkness consumes my being yet again
Eating away at the very depths of my soul
This is where the devil has free reign
The place in which I’ve lost control
Life is so tumultuous as of late
Nothing seems to be going as I please
It’s left me bodied up with all this rage
Pressure building and succumbing to a sweet release
My insides feel as if they want to explode
This must not go on much longer for I foresee
If things carry on as they are… thus too heavy a load
Will then become the end of me.
Copyright ©
suzy
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2002-08-28 17:00:30]
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Re: Darkness
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 29th August 2002 @ 12:43:21 AM AEST
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| I can so relate right now. Hang in there. Thanks for sharing |
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Re: Darkness
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by yellow_sundragon on
Thursday, 29th August 2002 @ 04:03:44 AM AEST
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Wow suzy, this is really good... hang in there, when you get to the bottom you can only go up.
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Re: Darkness
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by princesspurty on
Thursday, 29th August 2002 @ 10:47:16 AM AEST
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| very good, so sad though, but you write so well, keep it up! |
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Re: Darkness
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by Chrissie on
Thursday, 29th August 2002 @ 10:39:04 PM AEST
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You express these profound feelings very well Lasca ....I hope you find that writing them down is therapeutic.
I have a lot of your work to catch up on...I've fallen behind lately :(
Chrissie x |
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