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Worthless Whispers
Contributed by
afraid_of_fear
on
Sunday, 14th December 2003 @ 08:29:43 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Do you throw up a scream
Do you split, slit, cut the seam
Do you cough on your choking throat
Choke as you breathe in the dirty smoke
Reach out with your hands
As the black stinging rain lands
On your pitiful eyes
Does your mouth mutter honest lies, silent cries
Screaming goodbyes
In a hope to bring an end to this pain
(Pause to breathe in and out and in again)
Do you attempt to disguise this lifelong stain
Do you sit here and cry
And want to die
(Watch the rivers flood, the pouring blood)
Do you whisper goodbye
As you sit here and die
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2003-12-14 08:29:43]
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Re: Worthless Whispers
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by loopylou on
Sunday, 14th December 2003 @ 11:27:05 AM AEST
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| very sad but a very good poem |
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Re: Worthless Whispers
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 14th December 2003 @ 04:07:30 PM AEST
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| wooo i seen this the other day when u jus wrote it down its wkd and sooo sweet awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww.. .. i can totally relate. i love the questions (whered the ?'s go?) :) x |
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Re: Worthless Whispers
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by M on
Monday, 15th December 2003 @ 05:56:52 AM AEST
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This is very powerful, Charlotte, i love it.
EmilyxXx |
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Re: Worthless Whispers
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by bobotheclown on
Wednesday, 17th December 2003 @ 02:33:43 PM AEST
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wow very touching I agree with the anon comment that u should have put in the question marks. Good poem loved it all.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: Worthless Whispers
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by Soulless on
Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 06:26:43 PM AEST
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Hauntingly beautiful write,
It sent such vivid pictures to my mind,
Wonderful,
kisses,
~Soulless~ |
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Re: Worthless Whispers
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by silent on
Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 10:13:28 AM AEST
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I was about to swear then, wow that really drew me in, damn your good. Gotta read more of your stuff, hell
Silent |
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