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With No Reluctance
Contributed by
Vitreous_Soul
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Sunday, 14th December 2003 @ 06:43:58 AM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
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I saw my demise
I met my death in a dream
He led me away
Copyright ©
Vitreous_Soul
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2003-12-14 06:43:58] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: With No Reluctance
(User Rating: 1 ) by desertrose on
Sunday, 14th December 2003 @ 08:16:26 AM AEST (User
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Ahh hun I hope you do not meet death you be missed :(
Rose
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Re: With No Reluctance
(User Rating: 1 ) by lovingcritters on
Sunday, 14th December 2003 @ 05:40:23 PM AEST (User
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Really great Hiaku, VS. few words, but packed with much meaning! Dark, but understandable. For me is great!
Fine Hiaku at any rate...excellent!
lovingcritters
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Re: With No Reluctance
(User Rating: 1 ) by forever_lonely on
Sunday, 25th January 2004 @ 05:03:27 PM AEST (User
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v.s
great haiku v.s i agree and echo the last comments really intense so dark just amazing
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