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Life
Contributed by
CoLD
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Sunday, 14th December 2003 @ 01:31:10 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Life is a pain
Life is hard
Trust in Love
Don’t disregard
Live the life you want to live
Don't take what you really want to give
Be true to those true to you
Cherish those who you do lose
Eventually your life will end
so with those rules make a bend
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CoLD
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2003-12-14 01:31:10]
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Re: Life
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by Three_Blind_Mice on
Sunday, 14th December 2003 @ 01:40:26 AM AEST
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Nicely done and welcome, :o)
the site Drunk |
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Re: Life
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by bobotheclown on
Sunday, 14th December 2003 @ 02:25:14 AM AEST
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I liked this very short and simple and be advised no one will steal your poetry and if they do I will kill them lol j/k. Hope to see a lot more from you.
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Re: Life
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by desertrose on
Sunday, 14th December 2003 @ 02:55:41 AM AEST
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i won't steal your poem because joe will kill me ..welcome to this place. i'm new to
and i lost my capital letters .........
http://www.todays-woman.net
rose |
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Re: Life
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by venkat on
Sunday, 14th December 2003 @ 03:14:23 AM AEST
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| Don't worry..here so many youngsters are talented..no body will steal..keep them coming on. venkat |
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Re: Life
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by LovingWhispers on
Sunday, 14th December 2003 @ 10:49:39 AM AEST
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I love the message in your write.Wise words.
Be not afraid to vent the soul
For without release,there,s no control
sorry :P..in a mood *shrugs*
LW |
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Re: Life
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by Stalkee on
Sunday, 14th December 2003 @ 07:22:25 PM AEST
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| i want MORE! =) great job |
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Re: Life
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by driping_blood on
Sunday, 11th January 2004 @ 07:40:33 PM AEST
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i read all your poems so far thay r short but i like them besides i really didnt want to read that much ...lol...
keep writing
and i hope u r less concerned about someone stilling your poems only idiots cant rite a poem
i am not always good at the spelling but everyone has some flaw
look at god for exapmle he made humans |
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