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daddy's bad experience

Contributed by merry on Saturday, 13th December 2003 @ 09:00:56 PM in AEST
Topic: FamilyPoems

daddy dearest you look so pale
sick in bed we'll tuck you in
care for you just like our dolls
hachooo and a manly grin

i need to take two aspirin
get a glass of water please (hachoo)
she scampers off just like a nurse
says bless you when her daddy sneezed

oh dear she cannot reach the tap
and her daddy needs his nap
she's seen the dog drink from the bowl
so it must be alright for that

she dips dad's cup into the deep
and proudly brings him a long cool drink
his nose is red and he's got cold feet
here you go Daddy, now go to sleep

he takes his aspirin with a big gulp
says thanks sweetie, you're a big help
she tiptoes off quietly
reads a story while daddy sleeps

oh dear poor daddy's getting worse
she heard him in the bathroom curse
he's turned the queerest shade of green
she thinks that she has ever seen

off to the hospital he goes
all green and red and runny nose
the doctor thinks that Dad's real bad
asks about what foods he's had

oh my it seems the water's tainted
where did you fill that cup young lady?
"ummm well you see i couldn't reach
so i filled it from......the toilet bowl"

gmm2003

Copyright © merry ... [ 2003-12-13 21:00:56]
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Re: daddy's bad experience (User Rating: 1 )
by Three_Blind_Mice on Saturday, 13th December 2003 @ 09:11:45 PM AEST
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Sad but true this awful tale, lol You wrote it just as it happened too. You are waaaaay too much Gaille. lmao

A much healthier drunk ;o)

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