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Crawling Through The Razor Blades
Contributed by
MoonlitAngel
on
Saturday, 13th December 2003 @ 08:17:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I want you to romance me
Blow my mind and dance with me
Touch my face and brush away
Every fear into yesterday
I want you to understand
You hold it all in your hands
Just let me do what I will
Cut my wrist and swallow some pills
But I wonder
Would you hate the scars?
I'm just one more disillusioned fallen star
Would you be angry?
I'm just trying to find what makes me happy
But I know I'll never need the sweet release
The way I need you and your soul healing peace
I love to watch the blood flow
To me it looks beautiful
But inside I'm so afraid
I'm crawling through the razor blades
I see you through the smoky haze
Don't ignore my blurry gaze
Kiss me till the tears have dried
Until there's no more pain inside
But I know
It's all gonna end
We're just two more wounded souls trying to mend
Just two more victims
Of a heartbreakingly hopeless addiction
But I'll hold on to you until it kills me
'Cause it's being in your arms that sets me free
I don't know if I'm ever gonna make it by
But I hope I'll always be someone in your eyes
More than just a fallen star
With her arms covered in scars
Crawling through the razor blades
I don't wanna be afraid
Please don't be angry
It's you that makes me happy
Copyright ©
MoonlitAngel
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2003-12-13 20:17:48]
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Re: Crawling Through The Razor Blades
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by sicknivesevered on
Saturday, 13th December 2003 @ 11:12:31 PM AEST
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| Superb write. It has a wonderful cadence to it. You meld it together so well. Excellent work. |
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Re: Crawling Through The Razor Blades
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by venkat on
Sunday, 14th December 2003 @ 03:35:25 AM AEST
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| Wow..its not only sad but also chilling. venkat |
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Re: Crawling Through The Razor Blades
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by deadly_blaZe on
Sunday, 14th December 2003 @ 08:09:34 PM AEST
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The title definately caught my attention... i liked this very much
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Re: Crawling Through The Razor Blades
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Thursday, 18th December 2003 @ 10:58:47 PM AEST
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wow - great title...
awesome poem followed
almost could be a song... I really liked this. |
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Re: Crawling Through The Razor Blades
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by afraid_of_fear on
Sunday, 4th January 2004 @ 05:20:46 PM AEST
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I love how this is sort of black and white, love and despair joined as one. You've written an amazing poem here : )
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