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The Mockery, a.k.a. the Truth.

Contributed by Suz on Saturday, 13th December 2003 @ 06:24:03 PM in AEST
Topic: ChristianPoetry

How can God be real?
With so much hate,
so much death?

No such thing as predestination
You shouldn't give up your [real] life
To serve God
because you say he'll
forgive you, all forgiving, no matter what

So go sin! Go be "bad" cause you said
that
he'll forgive you

Hypocrites
You get me kinda angry

You walk around with the bling bling
And the blunts
And then you go and you pray
And then you say that it's all a sin
And then you sin
And then you pray
And then, it's okay
Cause you got da believin'
And the shiny cross on your middle finger

Shove it

And that's why you're better than me right
That's why you think I'm wrong
Cause you made up some crap

Ooh I said 'crap', I'm going to Hell

Cause you feel alone in the world
You get me kinda angry.

What about people in prehistoric times?
Did you think about them?
They lived
They surrvived without whining to some made up "god"
They surrvived, and it's too bad
Because they had us.

So what? Shut up
You get me kinda angry.

Copyright © Suz ... [ 2003-12-13 18:24:03]
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Re: The Mockery, a.k.a. the Truth. (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Saturday, 13th December 2003 @ 10:06:04 PM AEST
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this touches me deep thnx for sharing this...

Bobo (Joel)

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