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Child Within the Beast
Contributed by
Vitreous_Soul
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Saturday, 13th December 2003 @ 05:47:33 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Crimson eyes that glow
An eerie stare that projects
From protruding fangs blood will flow
Like twigs he snaps their necks
Bloodlust interminable grows
Claws to shred, nails to rip
Immensly strong to crush every bone
Blood on his tongue, saliva drips
Garnet epitaph paints a tombstone
As redemption even further away will slip
Laying dormant for years
A blackened heart can still beat
Fiery eyes can still shed tears
For hatred is never complete
Burning out as the brightest star
The road that ends so soon
Hurting more than the deepest scar
Under the spell of the weeping moon
The stone facade can fall so far
Laying dormant for years
A blackened heart can still beat
Fiery eyes can still shed tears
For hatred is never complete
Within the lion dwells the cub
Ferocity will always fall deceased
Within the darkness is a sliver of light
Shining on the child within the beast
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Re: Child Within the Beast
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by 13Hopes on
Saturday, 13th December 2003 @ 05:58:08 AM AEST
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This poem i thought was very good!!
Cheers
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Re: Child Within the Beast
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by Three_Blind_Mice on
Saturday, 13th December 2003 @ 07:54:53 AM AEST
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Nicely done! I always have liked the dark writes.
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Re: Child Within the Beast
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by Kie on
Saturday, 13th December 2003 @ 11:48:55 AM AEST
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I felt so much pain flowing thru this poem. It was very very beautifully written and the little child I just want to hug...
Kie |
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Re: Child Within the Beast
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by lovingcritters on
Saturday, 13th December 2003 @ 03:06:28 PM AEST
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BRAVO! BRAVO! TREMENDOUSLY WELL DONE! VS....WE SEE THIS ALL AROUND US!
And in this system of things...everyone wears a mask....for protection...or morass cover up! I've never heard anyone say so well, what you just said.....deep down every well....is water that runs deep. Inside almost everyone of us is a child with love to give, with love to keep!
So many are so battered....they don't want anyone to see.....their hurting souls leak!
Fantastic, splendid write.
Feelings just right!
ConSue
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Re: Child Within the Beast
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by Eve on
Sunday, 14th December 2003 @ 10:32:21 AM AEST
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I give up. This is insanely incredible, and I fight off the urge to fall over no more.
Falling over in .5 seconds,
-Eve. |
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