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A Common Answer That Should Be Taken Seriously
Contributed by
Yodo
on
Saturday, 13th December 2003 @ 12:48:49 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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The trees are quiet
The twilight surrounds
There are tears in my eyes
Your answer resounds
I told you "I love you"
And the moments grew few
But the hours crept by
Before "I love you too"
Copyright ©
Yodo
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2003-12-13 00:48:49] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: A Common Answer That Should Be Taken Seriously
(User Rating: 1 ) by AzurePaladin on
Saturday, 13th December 2003 @ 02:23:46 AM AEST (User
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i love this poem. its simple but it does have much truth in it. such a common phrase it becomes... but it really does require more thought or respect....
aaah don't mean to rant, i just had a bit of an experience of my own. -_-
great poem, though! |
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Re: A Common Answer That Should Be Taken Seriously
(User Rating: 1 ) by Kie on
Saturday, 13th December 2003 @ 09:24:02 AM AEST (User
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so sweet and so romantic
Kie |
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Re: A Common Answer That Should Be Taken Seriously
(User Rating: 1 ) by JusMeOtay on
Tuesday, 20th January 2004 @ 02:39:40 PM AEST (User
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ok...that one...that gets printed and posted on my wall yodo. sometimes the shortest ones are the best eh?
*jeni* |
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Re: A Common Answer That Should Be Taken Seriously
(User Rating: 1 ) by JJTiger on
Wednesday, 25th February 2004 @ 12:17:50 AM AEST (User
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Beautifuly written. Short, but sweet. Good write |
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