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What You've Done for Me
Contributed by
callistonynaeve
on
Friday, 12th December 2003 @ 08:54:39 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I don't know how you make me feel
this way, but you do it completely.
It seems like you just know the way
to my heart.
I love you, just as sure at the sun will
rise, be sure of my love for you.
Even if you don't feel you need my love,
I give it all to you.
My body is in your arms, but my heart is in
your teeth.
Your all I need, when I feel just your
body brushing mine, it causes sensations
I didn't even know were there.
Before you, I was lost, then I found you.
You showed me the way without even knowing
you did so.
If you ask how much I love you, I may not
be able to answer. No words could possibly
express what you mean to me.
I love you.
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callistonynaeve
... [
2003-12-12 20:54:39] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: What You've Done for Me
(User Rating: 1 ) by eternal_sorrows on
Friday, 12th December 2003 @ 09:35:27 PM AEST (User
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Sounds like someones in love.....tee hee......great write! |
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Re: What You've Done for Me
(User Rating: 1 ) by 13Hopes on
Saturday, 13th December 2003 @ 06:38:55 AM AEST (User
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And oh how nice does it feel when you are .... :)
Nice Work
Cheers
#13 |
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Re: What You've Done for Me
(User Rating: 1 ) by nauphragus on
Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 04:30:42 PM AEST (User
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It's simple, it's hardly a poem. But sounds quite honest. |
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