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You Are Not Him
Contributed by
eternal_sorrows
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Friday, 12th December 2003 @ 07:53:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I know it is wrong, it can't be right
as you hold me into the night.
It is him on my mind, him which I see
the warmth of your body is him touching me.
As I look in your eyes darkened with gray
your cold beating heart has made me this way.
Life is not changing so it must be me
rotating seasons I just can't see.
Show me a smile, I'll show you a tear
tell me of laughter, I'll tell you of fear.
Standing in shadows alone in the night,
hiding in corners away from the light.
Looking at you, looking at me
no, you are not him and never will be.
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Re: You Are Not Him
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by DreamWeaver on
Friday, 12th December 2003 @ 08:16:43 PM AEST
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| Excellent write ... I can really relate to these words ... well done ... Jan |
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Re: You Are Not Him
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by venkat on
Saturday, 13th December 2003 @ 08:57:51 AM AEST
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| Agreed with the above comment..venkat |
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Re: You Are Not Him
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by sweetangeluk on
Saturday, 13th December 2003 @ 01:01:17 PM AEST
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Show me a smile, I'll show you a tear
tell me of laughter, I'll tell you of fear.
Standing in shadows alone in the night,
hiding in corners away from the light.
Looking at you, looking at me
no, you are not him and never will be.
You expressed the words so well
Very well written to
Great poem
I can relate to this
Love
Angelxxxxx |
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Re: You Are Not Him
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by harshreality on
Saturday, 13th December 2003 @ 08:30:07 PM AEST
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I've been trying to replace "him" for the last 6 yrs. and I can really relate to this. Some feelings are so relentless makes me wonder if I'll ever have the chance to love like that again.
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Re: You Are Not Him
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by callistonynaeve on
Sunday, 14th December 2003 @ 10:23:41 AM AEST
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| You are such a talented writer. You seem to be talking right to me. Thank you. |
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Re: You Are Not Him
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by Ldy_Tryst_Vampyrre on
Wednesday, 24th December 2003 @ 10:33:24 PM AEST
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| this is so full of emotion...i cried.......such a great poem...blessed be. |
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