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Unspoken Words
Contributed by
eternal_sorrows
on
Friday, 12th December 2003 @ 07:51:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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There is nothing left
for us to say
we live and breathe
this everyday.
We talk and talk
and talk some more
repeating things
we've said before.
Do not take my
silence wrong
words unheard
are spoken strong
and though a tear
rolls from my eye
you will never
see me cry.
This pain I feel
is not for you
but for the things
I let you do.
Shame on you
shame on me
how could I ever
let this be?
Yet, this shall end
soon someday
I never loved you
anyway.
Copyright ©
eternal_sorrows
... [
2003-12-12 19:51:58]
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Re: Unspoken Words
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by callistonynaeve on
Friday, 12th December 2003 @ 08:58:56 PM AEST
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| I am in love with this poem. Thank you SO MUCH for sharing your amazing writing talent! Thank you thank you thank you |
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Re: Unspoken Words
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by irshprnss on
Friday, 12th December 2003 @ 10:14:13 PM AEST
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Very stong write. Emotions expressed very clearly, Great Job
Diana |
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Re: Unspoken Words
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by 13Hopes on
Saturday, 13th December 2003 @ 01:52:51 AM AEST
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So many end like yhis, sad really... Great write...
Cheers
#13 |
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Re: Unspoken Words
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by sweetangeluk on
Saturday, 13th December 2003 @ 01:07:42 PM AEST
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There is nothing left
for us to say
we live and breathe
this everyday.
We talk and talk
and talk some more
repeating things
we've said before
How many of us if we are truthful seem to have nothing left to say
Like a roundabout going around in the same circles and getting nowhere
Two differences of opinion
Two different people
Fantastic poem
Loved it
But such sadness in the words so heartfelt
Take care
Love
Angelxxxxx |
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