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I remember
Contributed by
Cobalt
on
Friday, 12th December 2003 @ 06:45:29 PM in AEST
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I remember every little thing.
I remember the first time
I truly saw you
and thought
just how beautiful
you really were.
I remember our first kiss,
and the first time we made love.
I can still remember your eyes
the first time that you said
you loved me.
I remember when I woke up
one morning and realized
you would hate me forever.
I walked away instead of try
sealing hate to fate
for what I'd done.
I remember the pain
in your eyes as
you begged and pleaded
as if it were your life.
I remember the moment,
days ago when
I realized it was true.
I will forever remember
all the wrong I've done.
I know the pain in my heart
will just be buried
yet never go away.
I remember that now I've lost you.
I remember forever,
and ever,
and always.
The book of the faulty phoenix.
Copyright ©
Cobalt
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2003-12-12 18:45:29]
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Re: I remember
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by LovingWhispers on
Friday, 12th December 2003 @ 08:20:08 PM AEST
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Love it now as I loved it then..Except now its better lol.Glad I spoke up :P *wink*
Deep feelings here,really moves me.
Sharon
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Re: I remember
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by eternal_sorrows on
Saturday, 13th December 2003 @ 07:57:55 AM AEST
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Absolutly beautiful write! I love it!
ES |
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Re: I remember
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by Kie on
Saturday, 13th December 2003 @ 09:42:37 AM AEST
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Sad, wise, heart wrenching
My heart just goes out to you....
Kie |
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Re: I remember
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by Three_Blind_Mice on
Sunday, 14th December 2003 @ 12:31:18 PM AEST
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Absolutely heartbreaking, a very emotion filled write.
the Drunk |
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Re: I remember
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by DreamWeaver on
Thursday, 18th December 2003 @ 01:51:47 AM AEST
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| A truly heartfelt and beautiful write ... I felt these feelings all the way through ... Jan |
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Re: I remember
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by Cynthia on
Friday, 19th December 2003 @ 12:05:04 PM AEST
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I agree with everybody else.
It's a sad write, but it's beautiful.
*S* Cynthia |
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Re: I remember
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by MoonlitAngel on
Saturday, 27th December 2003 @ 05:07:03 AM AEST
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Wow... it's beautiful. Tender and sweet, yet so sad... we all hurt people and lose people. This poem really made me feel it, though. Beautiful.
~ Moonlit |
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