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Feelings of Suicide
Contributed by
bobotheclown
on
Friday, 12th December 2003 @ 05:05:46 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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I let out my life with a sigh
Sick of cooping up these emotions
Wanting to take this razor
This exacto knife, this lighter
And show the world how [i] sick [/i] I really am
The smell of burning flesh
Caresses my nostrils, pain
Floods my brain
The longing to taste blood
Overwhelms my weakened defences
I think about jumping off a bridge
That's so quick, but messy,
But like a magnet
Or some subliminal message
Buzzing in my brain, I'm beckoned
I walk around town
Aimlessly, like some lost beggar
No purpose just talking to myself
Pointed and laughed at
I don't care I'm beyond feeling
I'm frozen inside, void of feeling
Put a bullet in me
Saunter away as my life ebbs
I'm sure God will give you a medal
For ending one poor man's suffering
Copyright ©
bobotheclown
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2003-12-12 17:05:46]
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Re: Feelings of Suicide
(User Rating: 1 )
by norticus on
Friday, 12th December 2003 @ 05:11:48 PM AEST
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I actually did like this. For some reason I seem to love peoms about other people's pain. It makes me happy. Burning flesh is a nice poutpouri isn't it?
I give this a 4.6 on the Nortiscale.
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Re: Feelings of Suicide
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by Cobalt on
Friday, 12th December 2003 @ 05:12:44 PM AEST
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| This was an interesting one... I can relate to some of the ideas though heh. Except I want to jump off a bridge... With a bungee cord of course. |
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Re: Feelings of Suicide
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by Chanti on
Saturday, 13th December 2003 @ 04:51:15 PM AEST
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| Awesome write Joel. I really liked this one.. I hope you dont still feel this way |
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Re: Feelings of Suicide
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by SensitiveSoAbused on
Saturday, 13th December 2003 @ 11:30:58 PM AEST
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| awesome stuff joel. at times i look at you and i see a mirror |
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Re: Feelings of Suicide
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by desertrose on
Sunday, 14th December 2003 @ 02:57:53 AM AEST
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bobo i'm more scared of the message you said about killing us if we take colds poem lol
depression i have been down that road... glad you are ok or are you |
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Re: Feelings of Suicide
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by afraid_of_fear on
Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 01:40:12 PM AEST
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ooh i missed this one.. but i like it, i love the pure emotions flowing out of it.. the last line is very clever, i like it..
charlotte xxx |
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