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You came to close
Contributed by
MnMnMsrcool
on
Wednesday, 28th August 2002 @ 01:44:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Hey there stranger,
Haven’t seen your face for awhile,
Where have u been all my life,
Did u have to be that way?
Did u have to come so close?
Did u have to do this to me?
Why do I feel this way?
You made me feel this way,
It’s all your fault u had to come close,
I hate you for that,
But then again I love you,
It’s all the same to me,
Loving is hating,
Hating is loving.
You make me feel warm,
You make me feel good,
You inspire me,
You bring me faith,
But you came to close,
So close that I could feel your breath,
Your heart,
Your thoughts,
You came to close,
I hate you.
Copyright ©
MnMnMsrcool
... [
2002-08-28 13:44:05]
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Re: You came to close
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Wednesday, 28th August 2002 @ 01:49:39 PM AEST
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| Hmmm..I think I can identify a bit with this.... |
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Re: You came to close
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 28th August 2002 @ 03:13:55 PM AEST
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| the heart tug-o-war!!! |
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Re: You came to close
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by Smackmeplz24 on
Thursday, 29th August 2002 @ 12:13:15 PM AEST
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| I really like this one the way everything keeps going back and forth is really awesome |
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Re: You came to close
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by Smackmeplz24 on
Thursday, 29th August 2002 @ 12:13:16 PM AEST
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| I really like this one the way everything keeps going back and forth is really awesome |
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Re: You came to close
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by MisterRight on
Friday, 30th August 2002 @ 06:53:33 AM AEST
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WOW! I like this one a lot! Great write! Too true how love and hate sometimes blur together! WOW!
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Re: You came to close
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by ShadowsCloud on
Tuesday, 12th November 2002 @ 12:44:08 AM AEST
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Spectacular poem
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Re: You came to close
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by LayDownPlayDead on
Wednesday, 20th November 2002 @ 10:57:16 AM AEST
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| Great write. I wrote one kinda like this awhile ago. when somebody I loved go too close to me and started to know me too well, i hated it. I loved them but hated them at the same time. |
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