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Who will she be?
Contributed by
goodgirl
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Thursday, 11th December 2003 @ 10:19:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I can feel you drifting away
Drifting through the air like smoke
Soon we’ll be strangers
I wish it were a dream, even a joke
But the question that haunts my soul
Is 'Who will she be?', this girl
This girl that captures the heart I could not
A heart for which so hard I fought
Years from now
I see you holding her tenderly
I smile and say hello
While my heart cries silently
The ring on her finger
Glistens like a dagger in the sunlight
Does she love you like I do, George?
With all her might
Walking away
I hear you say
‘Oh, no one honey, just an old friend’
As I whisper under my breath
‘So long, my darling.
I’ll love you ‘til death’
But the question still remains
Who will she be?
Everyday, I hope and pray
That she will be me
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goodgirl
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2003-12-11 22:19:26]
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Re: Who will she be?
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by Remy on
Thursday, 11th December 2003 @ 10:21:46 PM AEST
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Well goodgirl, keep on truckin' I suppose - now that sounds beyond cheezy. Wow, this sounds so familiar. I like this. It's good stuff you have here.
~Remy~ |
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Re: Who will she be?
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by blueheart on
Thursday, 11th December 2003 @ 10:29:19 PM AEST
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| Beautiful :) |
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Re: Who will she be?
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by Cobalt on
Friday, 12th December 2003 @ 12:16:24 AM AEST
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| This was a pretty good write. I enjoyed reading it. I hope it turns out for the best to you. |
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