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Something To Think About

Contributed by remy on Thursday, 11th December 2003 @ 10:16:16 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

I should given two weeks notice...
But what is that going to do but make you angry?
You almost made it look so hopeless...
That's done for now and I'm out

Can you hear me?
Will you see me?
Or is there something more that I should think about
Is it ending?
Is it starting?
This hopeless hope is stuck like the words in my throat

That's the best of communication I've ever had...
With a silent reply

It was brilliant dance and I loved it
Like the perfect chance to make it
But it had to end or change hands
But it had to go you understand

I could have done it so much better...
I failed you in and out of every circumstance
Couldn't even write to you a letter...
Without making you guilty

Will you dance now?
Take a chance now?
Or is there something more that you should think about
Are we ending?
Are we starting?
This hopeless hope is stuck like the words in my throat

That's the best of communication I've ever had...
With still no reply

It was brilliant dance and I loved it
Like the perfect chance to make it
But it had to end or change hands
But it had to go you understand
It was brilliant dance and I loved it
Like the perfect chance to make it
It had to end or change hands
I have to go you understand

We share a bill but don't share a heart
They said it was doomed right at the start
I didn't hear them, I should have heard them
What's the thing that I deserve then?
I'm up for grace but you haven't changed
Not digging for apologies just loose change
A little nickle of something besides you
But again you go back to being you
What's the point again of this little game?
Everything looks to be just the same
Tell me now the point of this game

It was brilliant dance and I loved it
Like the perfect chance to make it
But it had to end or change hands
But it had to go you understand
I have to go you understand...
Do you understand...
Do you...
Do you...

Copyright © remy ... [ 2003-12-11 22:16:16]
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Re: Something To Think About (User Rating: 1 )
by Remi on Tuesday, 10th February 2004 @ 07:33:08 PM AEST
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this is a very good write

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