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THE RIVER OF DOOM
Contributed by
Hannah_jeannie_Brazeau
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Thursday, 11th December 2003 @ 07:33:25 PM in AEST
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My eyes fill up with tears
like clouds condensing in the sky;
They pour down my face like rain.
Why , dear God, tell me why?
They puddle on the page
and begin to fill the room.
These are tears of deep sorrow
that make up the river of doom.
Our friendship used to be
something I cherished every day.
And now, just all of the sudden
that friendship was snatched away.
I had a friend in you
It took away the gloom.
But once the tears took over
came the tears of the river of doom.
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Hannah_jeannie_Brazeau
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2003-12-11 19:33:25]
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Re: THE RIVER OF DOOM
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by secretwind on
Thursday, 11th December 2003 @ 09:43:00 PM AEST
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Re: THE RIVER OF DOOM
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by SkYYBLu on
Saturday, 3rd January 2004 @ 01:51:46 PM AEST
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Bravo!
I really liked this. This is exactly what it feels like to cry... ...to lose a friend. Good job! |
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