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working girl
Contributed by
ianthe
on
Thursday, 11th December 2003 @ 06:16:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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when you're cold
baby, let me warm you
when you're tired
let my arms hold you
tell me your dreams
your secrets and fears
i'll sit by your side
and share a few beers
we can laugh together
a gift that is rare
in this dog eat dog world
and when you turn out the light
remember my smile
is with you all night
Copyright ©
ianthe
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2003-12-11 18:16:36] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: working girl
(User Rating: 1 ) by Cobalt on
Thursday, 11th December 2003 @ 07:09:33 PM AEST (User
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I liked this. It brought such a smile to my face. Thankyou. |
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Re: working girl
(User Rating: 1 ) by Wrybod on
Thursday, 11th December 2003 @ 07:46:36 PM AEST (User
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A nice bit of reality romance
bob |
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Re: working girl
(User Rating: 1 ) by SensitiveSoAbused on
Thursday, 11th December 2003 @ 08:13:38 PM AEST (User
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it was a nice enough poem, sweet,
but the term working girl refers to a prostitute so i found the title very misleading |
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