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Hopefull Chasm of Tears
Contributed by
Yodo
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Thursday, 11th December 2003 @ 06:02:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Life's looking down her nose
But I'm holding out hope
I hate all this hurt
But I just can't let go
Please go away
My rope's starting to fray
I'm hanging on the end
But there must be a way
So up I climb
I just can't find
The end seems so much farther
And I hear your voice from behind
I look down these walls
Of this chasm so tall
I let go of my rope
And begin to fall
Wind rushing by
Looking up to the sky
I'm trusting you'll catch me
As I kiss my fears goodbye.
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Yodo
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2003-12-11 18:02:16]
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Re: Hopefull Chasm of Tears
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by bobotheclown on
Thursday, 11th December 2003 @ 06:07:17 PM AEST
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wow this was beautiful and torturingly sad. I absolutely loved it
I hate all this hurt
and
As I kiss my fears goodbye.
Amazing
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: Hopefull Chasm of Tears
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by Rachel on
Thursday, 11th December 2003 @ 06:14:13 PM AEST
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| This really is a beatifully written poem. I can definitely relate. Nice job. |
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Re: Hopefull Chasm of Tears
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by harshreality on
Thursday, 11th December 2003 @ 11:17:36 PM AEST
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| beautiful! It reminded me of that trust game that you play when your young the one where you close your eyes and fall straight back and trust your bestfriend to catch you. It seems eventhough were older, in a sense we're still playing the same game. I hope you win!!!! |
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