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Glacier Girl
Contributed by
norticus
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Thursday, 11th December 2003 @ 12:17:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Her Lillypad green eyes stare, there.
Through long bangs of black hair.
In a charm on her neck hangs a vile full of tears.
Her rage overshadows her deep anchored fears.
She reminds me of a story I once adored.
Finally I found her my long lost Lenore.
She stands on an iceberg floating at sea.
Hopelessly manic and oblivious of me.
She cries out a song all of her own.
A frigid shrill, a cackle and moan.
I would swim valiently; no cold should I fear.
To be her knight and she my Gwynaviere.
Her short slender fingers gripping the sword.
Warning after warning all gone ignored.
With a slash and a stab she drops to the ice.
Under her belly, I see soy sauce on rice.
My love gone forever before we'd met.
So now I too go to meet my Juliet.
jz
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Re: Glacier Girl
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by shelby on
Thursday, 11th December 2003 @ 02:10:18 PM AEST
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wow so vivid and full of details well done
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Re: Glacier Girl
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by bobotheclown on
Thursday, 11th December 2003 @ 06:17:29 PM AEST
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Hopelessly manic and oblivious of me.
That line just blew me away. This was pure talent and wow the word beautiful doesn't quite cut it. I loved the imagery in this.
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Re: Glacier Girl
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by Kie on
Friday, 12th December 2003 @ 09:39:06 AM AEST
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After reading this thrice I am still spellbound!
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Re: Glacier Girl
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 12th December 2003 @ 09:55:12 AM AEST
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| captivatingly beautiful, hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Glacier Girl
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by Ilhar on
Saturday, 13th December 2003 @ 08:23:20 PM AEST
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interesting write to say the least
for my sense a real feast
vivid and romantic in some obscure way
enjoyable read thanks for making my day
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