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A Love As No Other
Contributed by
eternal_sorrows
on
Thursday, 11th December 2003 @ 06:05:05 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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As I look at your name
please say it's not true
chiseled in stone
shiny and new.
This can't be happening
it must be a dream
I've been asleep now
forever it seems.
It's not right
and life's not fair
I call for you
though you're not there.
As you told me
I tried not to cry
yet, there's a hole in my heart
filled with questions of why.
I cry day and night
missing you
and for all the things
we still wanted to do.
My soul will scream
the rest of my life
with pain so deep
it cuts like a knife.
I try to move on
yet, I'm so lost without you
you were my strength
in all I would do.
My eternal love
is as no other
a special bond shared
from daughter to mother.
Copyright ©
eternal_sorrows
... [
2003-12-11 06:05:05]
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Re: A Love As No Other
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by 13Hopes on
Thursday, 11th December 2003 @ 09:58:38 AM AEST
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Even though she is gone from this worldly place, she will live in your heart forever. At the strangest of times she will give youy strength to carry on in times of need. You just have to let her... I liked your poem..
Cheers
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Re: A Love As No Other
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by Cobalt on
Thursday, 11th December 2003 @ 10:49:58 AM AEST
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| Wow.... Ouch.... Just always remember her. |
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Re: A Love As No Other
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by Jeff9Man on
Thursday, 11th December 2003 @ 04:17:27 PM AEST
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I'm sorry, the poem is good though. wish I could relate to it, but I never had much for parents. someday you'll meet again, in happier days.
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Re: A Love As No Other
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by broken_wings on
Thursday, 11th December 2003 @ 09:21:05 PM AEST
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oh wow this is a really great poem! it flowed well and was just plain wonderful. I'm very sorry that your mother died, and i hope that everything in life can somehow get better for you.
www.allpoetry.com/poets/goodluckbear
visit me there and we could talk
ne-wayz good luck! |
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