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the screams within
Contributed by
kims4ever
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Thursday, 11th December 2003 @ 05:23:30 AM in AEST
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The world around me closes in, my mind grows cold yet again, the hate that rages deep inside, like a raging inferno as I close my eyes, I feel my soul being torn apart, as my endless loathing pulls at my heart, I scream out loud, but I don't know why, who would listen to my desperate cries, There is no helping it, there is no cure, though somehow my mind and body have endured, to try to escape it would be foolish it seems, I cannot rid myself of these ghastly screams, the echoes I hear will fade with time, but soon to return if only to remind, as the days pass by my will is destroyed, turned into an endless void, I try to stop it but don't think I can, constantly feeling the sorrows of man, I am always lost in this obscuring shroud, I can hear the voice of hope, but the screams are so loud, so if your lost and searching within, heed my warning of the screams within.
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Re: the screams within
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by loopylou on
Thursday, 11th December 2003 @ 06:25:25 AM AEST
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| when i read this i was over come with feelings a very emotionall piece |
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Re: the screams within
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by 13Hopes on
Thursday, 11th December 2003 @ 11:25:48 AM AEST
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I find this poem bringing strong emotions from within myself, great write..
Cheers
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Re: the screams within
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by shelby on
Thursday, 11th December 2003 @ 02:12:50 PM AEST
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so very powerfull and full of emotions.
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Re: the screams within
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by Jeff9Man on
Thursday, 11th December 2003 @ 04:26:30 PM AEST
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wow,
strong stuff. it gave me a strong visual. good work. |
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Re: the screams within
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by jaeann on
Thursday, 11th December 2003 @ 04:48:12 PM AEST
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| yes my friend...the screams will always be there......awesome emotional piece.....it flows just right........ |
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Re: the screams within
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by mystical_illusion on
Friday, 12th December 2003 @ 08:55:31 PM AEST
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I agree with all the above comments. Very well written, I enjoyed it alot.
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