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Why don't people understand?
Contributed by
starcheat
on
Wednesday, 10th December 2003 @ 10:12:40 PM in AEST
Topic:
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She sucks
She's a *****
she tries to act
like she's very cool
but don't you
realise that you just suck
you will never change
don't you know that
you will allways stay
that same old ***** that you are
if you think
that people should feel pity
for you
then forget
because people will never
why do you have to be so sensitive
why do you have to so selfish
you annoy people badly
then they go up and tell you
but then you get angry
and start crying
get out of my sight and stay that way for ever.
i hate you and that's my final decision
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starcheat
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2003-12-10 22:12:40]
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Re: Why don't people understand?
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 11th December 2003 @ 05:40:17 AM AEST
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wow starcheat!
kewl poem
rage effect working i think...
i can easily tell who you are talking about lol...ananya rite?
don't worry about her...
she is s ***** indeed...
hey, uh...send me a message that explains wat happened...
cuz i know you had a really big fight and all but i don't get it about what exactly?
but anywayz, stuff her..
**** her too...
stand tall and proud and keep your chin up!!!you're a great friend...
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don't yell at your boyfriend if he stares as i pass
cuz honey i can't help it
i was born with ass!!!! |
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Re: Why don't people understand?
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 11th December 2003 @ 05:56:14 AM AEST
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| dude, this sounds like you just got dumped.. its okay.. life is just this way.. your poem/song really sucks. stop writing like this.. i know you think you got inspiration.. perhaps finally, from this incident.. but the truth is.. it really sucks. |
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Re: Why don't people understand?
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by loopylou on
Thursday, 11th December 2003 @ 07:21:46 AM AEST
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| man you got alot of anger here but i suggest you write it in diffrent terms coz its just not soundening write here but it proberly could if you worked on it.....please dont take this to heart |
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Re: Why don't people understand?
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by EternitysLyre on
Thursday, 11th December 2003 @ 08:30:40 AM AEST
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Powerful words and emotional expletives may make for compelling speech, but I honestly don't know if it's a good idea to just throw this sort of language out in poetry.
It probably made you feel better, and alleviated your intense infuriation, so I suppose it served your purposes.
Hope you feel better, and start writing again with heart instead of hate.
"Ephemeral dreams and perpetual ire; Melodious lies from Eternity's Lyre." ~ The Palatine Poet. |
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