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This Bed Of Triumph
Contributed by
Exodus-On-Life
on
Wednesday, 10th December 2003 @ 06:34:47 PM in AEST
Topic:
happypoetry
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A twisting path of destruction
Face down in the grass
Losing anything and everything
When I fall asleep, I don't know what to think
Roll over beyond this
Toss my eyes into the sky
Breathe do deep it hurt my throat
In this bed of triumph in which I lie
Fold my arms behind my head
Listen to the birds fly through
Blades of grass that tickle my skin
Soft earth that stains our clothes
Never meant to hurt you
And this is goodbye
Taken on a different tune
In this bed of triumph in which I lie
Stronger than the strongest pleasure
Smiles softer than our lips
In my dreams is where we find out
Breathe the air, oh so crisp
Simple thoughts abide them
Single moments arise
Chances taken lightly
Surrender without compromise
This resting place, I meet you
Can't help to make me try
Such a beautiful tragedy to miss you
In this bed of triumph in which I lie
Never wondered yesterday
Nor asked what could have been
Life has taken control of me
Thrown in directions, I will fly
Soar through the clouds
And take back my eyes
Beautiful surrender
This bed of triumph, the hero lies
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Re: This Bed Of Triumph
(User Rating: 1 ) by full_blur on
Wednesday, 10th December 2003 @ 07:20:42 PM AEST (User
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Great Poem! Full of emotions and meaning painted in a beautiful way.
"Soar through the clouds
And take back my eyes"
is particularily strong.
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Re: This Bed Of Triumph
(User Rating: 1 ) by LiLFlirt08 on
Tuesday, 6th January 2004 @ 06:55:19 PM AEST (User
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i love this poem! you showed a great use of words and emotions. keep up the good work! |
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